web copy, dev, ci

web/src/routes/docs/+layout.svelte

@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@
 		{ref: "/docs/setup", label: "Setup"},
 		{section: "Usage", ref: "/docs/apps", label: "Apps"},
 		{ref: "/docs/services", label: "Services"},
-	  {ref: "/docs/settings", label: "Settings"},
+	  // {ref: "/docs/settings", label: "Settings"},
 		{section: "Maintenance", ref: "/docs/upgrading", label: "Upgrading"},
 		{ref: "/docs/uninstall", label: "Uninstall"},
 	  {ref: "/docs/support", label: "Support"},

web/src/routes/docs/installation/+page.svelte

@@ -47,7 +47,7 @@
 <h4>DigitalOcean</h4>
 <p>
 	For a cheap hosted server to try Shokku out, consider using DigitalOcean via this referral
-	link. You get $200 in credit for 60 days, and I get a $25 kick back :)
+	link. I get a kickback, and you get $200 in credit for 60 days - why not provision something beefy :)
 </p>
 <a target="_blank" href="https://www.digitalocean.com/?refcode=2fb615299eca&utm_campaign=Referral_Invite&utm_medium=Referral_Program&utm_source=badge">
 	<img src="https://web-platforms.sfo2.digitaloceanspaces.com/WWW/Badge%202.svg" alt="DigitalOcean Referral Badge" />

web/src/routes/docs/intro/+page.svelte

@@ -1,17 +1,16 @@
 <p>
-	Shokku is an interface for <a href="https://dokku.com" class="link">Dokku</a> - a
-	self-hostable PaaS/alternative to Heroku.
+	Shokku is an interface for <a href="https://dokku.com" class="link">Dokku</a> - an
+	open source, self-hostable <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Platform_as_a_service">PaaS</a>
+	(commercial options include <a href="heroku.com">Heroku</a>, <a href="fly.io">fly.io</a>,
+	or <a href="render.com">Render</a>)
 	<br />
-	It is recommended you are somewhat familiar with the underlying Dokku project
+	It is recommended you are familiar with the underlying Dokku project
 	(<a href="https://dokku.com/docs" class="link">read the docs</a>).
 </p>
 
 <p>
-	It is not associated with Dokku.
-</p>
-
-<p>
-	It is open-source and freely available, the repository is hosted on Github at
+	Shokku is not associated with Dokku - but it is similarly open-source and
+	freely available on Github at
 	<a class="link" href="https://github.com/texm/shokku">texm/shokku</a>.
 </p>
 
@@ -24,15 +23,15 @@
 </p>
 
 <ul>
-	<li>Works with your existing Dokku installation, or configures one during setup</li>
+	<li>Deploys as an app via an existing Dokku installation</li>
 	<li>Build, deploy, and manage almost any kind of application easily</li>
 	<li>Easy creation of <code>Redis, PostgreSQL, MySQL, and MongoDB</code> services</li>
-	<li>Reverse proxy and automatic SSL via LetsEncrypt</li>
 	<li>Github Integration</li>
 	<ul>
 		<li>Single-user or organisation installation</li>
 		<li>User management / Authentication</li>
-		<li>Repo-aware smart suggestions</li>
+		<li>todo: Repo-aware smart suggestions</li>
 	</ul>
 	<li>Optional API Access</li>
+	<li>... and more, try it out!</li>
 </ul>

web/src/routes/docs/setup/+page.svelte

@@ -1,17 +1,19 @@
 <script>
 	const ghAppUrl = "https://docs.github.com/en/apps/creating-github-apps/creating-github-apps/about-apps"
 	const manifestUrl = "https://docs.github.com/en/apps/creating-github-apps/creating-github-apps/creating-a-github-app-from-a-manifest";
-	// TODO
-	const codeManifestUrl = "https://github.com/texm/shokku"
+	const codeManifestUrl = "https://github.com/texm/shokku/blob/main/ui/src/routes/setup/github/%2Bpage.svelte#L10-L28"
 </script>
 
-<h2>Get Setup Key</h2>
+<h2>Setup Key</h2>
 <p>
 	Once installation is finished, a <i>setup key</i> will be output to
 	the console. Copy this, you will need it for the initial web setup.
+	<br />
+	This setup key is used to prevent any random internet stranger setting
+	up your deployment before you do.
 </p>
 
-<h2>Choose Setup Method</h2>
+<h2>Choose a Setup Method</h2>
 <h3>Github</h3>
 <p>
 	Setting up with Github creates a <a href={ghAppUrl}>Github App</a> to